Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Spectators


Crunch punctures the white, foggy stillness.
Crackle calls the redolent treat from within.
I move though the veil towards her smile
A loud pop pierces the silence.

A furtive glance behind reveals
Silent ghostly spectators.
My heart gallops,
their ghostly aura remains
Unbroken, I am alone.

Pop, I hurry forward
Something cold touches me
I scream. They scamper. It falls.
As I run towards her now widening smile
I hear them ripping open their spoils.

3 comments:

Scribe said...

I like it! Good goin' Mim!

Scribe said...

One thing... through the veil?

Olive and Ruby Cook said...

The veil = fog. It's a foggy veil